I reveal myself
Yes, I love you.
No remorse, whether you love me back or not.
Nothing can change it; I mean it, I do.
I won’t promise to bring down the stars,
Or die for you—just want to see us go far,
As far as my eyes can reach,
As long as my heart beats and my lungs can breathe.
Include me in your best and worst,
For any troubles, you'll be nursed.
For what is life if there's no sorrow?
Hold my hand, and let’s face tomorrow.
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Author:
InHumanSketch (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: it's a certain feeling i have for someone close to me.
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Comments5
A kind pledge and well written.
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I put a lot of thought into it, and your feedback means a lot to me.
Beautiful write!!
Thank you so much!
Nicely expressed . Good poem
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words. It means a lot to hear that.
Beautiful
Thank you so much!
You're welcome
That someone close to you is very fortunate. These are beautiful words of love. Such a generous love. Loving and not expecting love in return. Very nicely composed.
Thank you Cassie, i'm glad you like it, I really appreciate your kind words. it Inspires me more to write more
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