Say I can make it,
Say I can see,
I can't do this without you,
Your reassurance for me.
Everything is the same,
Without you life is plain,
And now your moving away?
Say I can make it!
Because without you I can't.
I'm not faking it,
There's just no point to stand.
Say I can last at least a week without you,
Without somthing to live for,
The hell I'd go through.
Say I can do this,
Say you'll be there.
Say I can survive,
Without you being right here,
Say I can make it,
I'm showering in tears.
Say you'll be here,
When the thunder strikes.
Say you'll be here,
When the fires hit.
Say you'll be here,
When the worlds a fight.
Say I can make it,
Say I can see,
Say you'll be here,
Because distance is my fear.
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Author:
Mason Vollman (
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Comments5
Separation is a difficult thing and this poem states it loud and clear
Yes so true, thanks Soren for all the reads and comments.
Being away from that one special person can make life so very challenging. Your poem tells me that. Nicely composed.
Thanks Cassie, so true! It can get hard! Thanks for the read and comment.
OK I will say it 'You will make it'.
I won't leave ya!
Note to self: 'Do shut up Orchi, it's not abnout you!' lol.
Yes, I would be sad if you left me Orchidee!! How do you know it's not about you.. 😉
Lol thanks for the read, and comment Orchidee!
its wonderful!
beautiful poem
Thanks
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