Holes in the ground

sorenbarrett

Each step we take we leave an imprint behind
All we touch we leave a mark
On this earth our signature signed
Where hand or foot we park

With heavy burden we sink deep
On rock no mark is found
Rain from those that weep
Fill these holes in the ground

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 27th, 2024 05:10
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Maplespal

    Even the ink from the pens or graphite in the pencils won't fill the holes. But, we write on hoping they get fixed.
    love it.

  • sorenbarrett

    Thanks so much for the read and the comment. The tears dry and the ink and poems fade.

  • Teddy.15

    Such a wonderful subject, I often reflect in the hope one day my son will inherit all the art I've collected and carefully framed, but who really knows, and of course my poems. 🌹

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Teddy for the read and most kind words. I hope he values those things as much as you.

    • MendedFences27

      We leave an imprint everywhere we go. Not traceable by us, but Nature is affected by all of the small things. "Rain from those that weep" was a very powerful line. - Phil A.

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you so much for the read and most kind comment it is most appreciated

      • Dan Williams

        Many believe that merely by looking at something, you change it. Calling something nameless is giving it a name. No mark on the rock?

        • sorenbarrett

          Time is a rock that erases all. Thanks for the read and comment it is deeply appreciated my friend



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