Us minus Life

Goli.Standbypoet

Us minus our wills!

Lost our ideal way of life, The ecstacy of existence lessens its chaos.
Did God first create us

or was it done by us? 

Isn't a man justified by choices he makes
And the decisions he takes
by his inventions and intentions?
Do and don't? Wills, wishes, and won't s, 
It seems to me that God is a  Sagittarius, 
Rides with joy, whipping his ride too many leashes! 
Around thousand × hundred & twenty four!

Always an original

never decoy!

What a Magnum!

P.S. Us minus wills, won't be the life anymore. 

  • Author: Golnarmn (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 27th, 2024 13:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Philosophical and worth pondering the issue of free will vs determinism

  • Tony36

    Excellent write



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