This realm in my dream

Vishakha

Not defined yet beautiful

Whatever I see even when my eyes asleep

Outshining the brightness

Feeling myself diving deep

Yet, it's not enough

Seeing through and can't unsee

Reminiscing the exact scene

Is this you too or it's just me

  • Author: Vishakha (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2024 08:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: All I wanna say is that this feels like a fever dream. It feels as if it's realistic and still like a movie. It's fascinating though, as if whatever I was in it was what I was in my past life, maybe.
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most poetic write and in answer to the question : We are all one.

    • Vishakha

      Thanks a lot and yes we, indeed, are all one.

    • Tony36

      Excellent write

      • Vishakha

        Thank you.

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Dan Williams

          Oh, it's me too allright. Nice work.

          • Vishakha

            Thank you.

          • tallisman

            Very introspective, compelling.

            • Vishakha

              Thanks a lot.



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