Not defined yet beautiful
Whatever I see even when my eyes asleep
Outshining the brightness
Feeling myself diving deep
Yet, it's not enough
Seeing through and can't unsee
Reminiscing the exact scene
Is this you too or it's just me
- Author: Vishakha ( Offline)
- Published: August 31st, 2024 08:18
- Comment from author about the poem: All I wanna say is that this feels like a fever dream. It feels as if it's realistic and still like a movie. It's fascinating though, as if whatever I was in it was what I was in my past life, maybe.
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Comments4
A most poetic write and in answer to the question : We are all one.
Thanks a lot and yes we, indeed, are all one.
Excellent write
Thank you.
You're welcome
Oh, it's me too allright. Nice work.
Thank you.
Very introspective, compelling.
Thanks a lot.
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