real love

rengoku


Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger

i know you feel the wounds of time,

the wandering feet of crows,

but i am yours and you are mine,

and none but me could know,

how all of you enraptures me,

till I can't look away 

I pray that I will live to see,

you wear a crown of grace,

my love,how beautiful you are

my love is everywhere you are

and when you kiss me,

i am lost or is it that im found?

  • Author: Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2024 13:00
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 52
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  • Vishakha

    I feel like I could just make a song out of it. Truely, a gem.

  • rengoku

    ty!

  • rengoku

    ty all

  • Mase ♪

    Beautiful write!

    • rengoku

      ty mason vollman

    • Dan Williams

      Ain't love grand?

      • Kenzie

        Very Grandy fandy

        • Kenzie

          And dandy

          • Kenzie

            Oh, and Randy glands very handy

            • Kenzie

              Elastic bandy, Sandy daddy,

            • Saleh Ben Saleh

              Nice, sweet, innocent love words.
              But true mature love is much more poetess.
              I like your rhymes.

            • Mase ♪

              So true Saleh.. Mature love is so much more.



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