Out of a sudden
Exploring the world
Doesn't matter
Unnecessary, I confess
Afraid to say it to anyone else
Living alone
Once a childhood dream
A lonely goal now I see
Guilts of letting you go
Leaving behind a love so deep
Making new friends
To be surrounded with girls
Girlhood at its best
Qualms of making you feel less
Qualms of you feeling abandoned and alone
Teenage love
Boys and their seraphic face
Crestfallen with their behavior
You worth much more
I want to show you my love
Studying abroad
Achieving life goals
Nugatory without you, my love
Who am I when you are gone ?
I have a presentiment about your soul
Visiting my favorite place
A feeling forever changed
Knowing I Left you behind
I fear you will evanesce
Because of your reticence
The cessation of my dreams
Doesn't matter when I grief
Unnecessary in front of you
You are the king of your dreams
The most gleaming diamond I have ever seen
To you I confess
I would make the earth stop
If it meant you realized your worth
And that your feelings are not a weakness
But the sign of a leader
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Author:
Neilton (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Another poem about my favorite person ,my brother with whom I share such a strong bond! I wrote it when I had to go to my village and I felt guilty for leaving him alone because he had some pretty rough days !
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Good write N.
Thanks a lot
Such a powerful and wonderful write Neilton, the fact that this poem is also autobiographical, it makes it even more compelling.
Though you have written this in a painful yearning tone, I do hope that you and your brother still hold on to happy memories, and are able to create new ones very soon.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
Wow thank you so so much for your kind words! ❤️❤️ I hope so ,too ! I just wish I could take his pain away he deserves so much and I don't want him to miss on life !
Thanks again for taking the time to write that ! It means a lot!
You are very welcome Neilton, and my fingers are crossed for both of you!
Thank you so much!!!
Powerful work. Fantastic.
Thank you so much!
It is perfectly clear how much you love your brother .. He is a very lucky young man to have a sister such as your goodly self .. and another poem dedicated to him .. Neville
Thank you Neville 😊 And it means so much to me you take the time to read my poems and comment !
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