You hit a blip when you read that
Its intriguing enough I get that
But why can't you shake it off
Deep enough I bet that
So there was a point where life made sense
Where things were sorted almost as if penned
No loads to pull off no lines to cut nothing too dense
Of course a time where heaven sprayed its scent
And gushhhhh the blip slaps all knocked
And you suddenly fall into this space that's cocked
And whose loaded these pounds and grams
And where is the scent that reached my palms
But my net was un-torn and I had backed it up
And as said I had dived right into the cut
But I guess the air slipped into the threads
Throwing me lost
if not DEAD.
- Author: adnan it is ( Offline)
- Published: September 5th, 2024 12:20
- Comment from author about the poem: Just getting through a phase that you wish never occurs to you ever. Read it as DEAD INSIDE but treat it as DEAD INSIGHT, hope my emotions touch you...
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this poem.
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