Stuck on these thoughts
Thoughts on the future
Thoughts of the past
Thoughts running present And the present running fast
The one that chases and gets my hold
That stabs on the point where I feel cold
And the wound it leaves sticks deep inside
And induces a fear that the thoughts are alive
The time by which they'll cover what's left
And make the move that'll leave me dead
Maybe I'll fight or I might shut
Maybe I'll wake up to find that I am stuck
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Author:
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- Comment from author about the poem: So it's when you get thoughts and thoughts and thoughts about something that pains you but you avoid delving deep into the cut then what's your choice tell me Face it??? Drown in??? No matter what you choose, you are stuck
- Category: Sad
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Comments4
The feeling of being stuck on a thought that you wish you could forget or get over with. I understand that feeling very well.
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So, if you awake up, you've not stuck. But if you're still stuck, then you must fill your mind with better thoughts that'll make you unstuck. The writing flow and the thoughts are stuck.
Damn!! Right in the feels!
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Hey, were all stuck some time or the other. This describes it very well.
Thank you!
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