I like how the sun sets in this city
On the late summer sunflowers
Golden, on green oaks
Late summer, cool winds
Flowing earnest to become
Fall mornings crisp
When the fog stays undone...
-Al
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Author:
Alan R (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 6th, 2024 19:14
- Category: Nature
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The changing of the season is upon us. You paint some beautiful imagery with your words here in this short poem. You gifted this reader sunflowers at sunset and it was much appreciated Alan. Have a beautiful Sunday.
Such a delightful message, I am fortunate that I could share my joy! Have a wonderful beginning of fall!
A great last line to this poem. "when the fog stays undone."
Thanks!
muchly enjoyed & in particular, your summative line say's it all .. neville
I am glad you liked it!
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