Turns out things change
Usuals become strange
The moment of remembering moments'
Ends with a 'hey'
It needed to be unveiled, It needed to be out
For what it meant to me, For which I didn't doubt
And then there was a night
I cried with happiness as if it was right
For a moment there i had everything i wanted
And upon closing my eyes i felt the bond bonded....
But the call didn't care,
everything was too good to be true
The night did change and old equations passed through.
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Author:
adnan it is (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I all strated when I wore my heart on my sleeves and yessssss!!!! It all went as I wished. Everything felt so right really and I had this surge of happiness never felt ever and then in a conversation over a call somethings happened and afterwards.....find in the poem
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Comments1
Sometimes things change for better....
It might not make sense today but maybe someday?
Amazing poem truly and especially the line- The moments of remembering moments ends with a 'hey'
Can't get over it.....
Exactly, right now it\'s really really hard to believe that everything will get alright but maybe some day I hope.. and about the line.. In hindi it exactly translates it to - \"yaad he vo din\" se \"hi\" tak.. I was unsure if people would get it but I suppose you got the true depth of it.. thank you so much really for reading and commenting!!! ☺️❤️
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