I tried and tried

senjuro


Notice of absence from senjuro
if I’m off I’m probably haging out with tanjiro

I tried and tried

a thousand times I tried to get to you

but I could never move

i had to lie and fall behind and blame it

all on you cause I still hate to lose 

towers fall and kingdoms crumble

but nows the time where the

earth would tremble at the sound 

of your name

strong man falls to him that humbles

the plans we made were bound to stumble

only you remain

i cried and cried 

a thousand tears I cried because of you 

i lost my one excuse

  • Author: anime fan (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 7th, 2024 21:56
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 35
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  • Mason Vollman

    Powerful and beautiful poem Zelda!

    • senjuro

      Ty mason

    • sorenbarrett

      A raw expression of the pain of loss. Impactful and stated with power.

      • senjuro

        Ty soren you are the best😉

      • Dan Williams

        What a fine description of sadness, something that is not so easy to do. Nice work.

      • John Lee

        A tear drops from the rose, because it knows when the dew dries, the petals will fall.

        • senjuro

          true john



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