Notice of absence from rengoku
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
if I’m off I’m probably punching my bed in anger
I tried and tried
a thousand times I tried to get to you
but I could never move
i had to lie and fall behind and blame it
all on you cause I still hate to lose
towers fall and kingdoms crumble
but nows the time where the
earth would tremble at the sound
of your name
strong man falls to him that humbles
the plans we made were bound to stumble
only you remain
i cried and cried
a thousand tears I cried because of you
i lost my one excuse
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Gyiuu does cry (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Powerful and beautiful poem Zelda!
Ty mason
A raw expression of the pain of loss. Impactful and stated with power.
Ty soren you are the best😉
What a fine description of sadness, something that is not so easy to do. Nice work.
A tear drops from the rose, because it knows when the dew dries, the petals will fall.
true john
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