lonlieness is bad its not good at all
all your time is spent looking at a wall
no one there to talk to only people on tv
there the only people that you ever see
then when bedtime comes making matters worse
you dont sleep at all for the lonely curse
nothing you can do nobody there insight
all you face is sadness and another lonely night
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I’m sorry you feel that way …
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Such a sad poem Jim. So many lonely people. It’s not just older people who feel lonely either. Young people can also feel isolated when living away from home. I sincerely hope you have family and friends who keep in close contact with you. We are very fortunate, still have grandchildren and their partners living with us. So difficult for young people to buy or rent these days. We live in a costly area, within commuting distance of London. Enjoy Sunday evening.
dont see any body they live a bit away from me
my garden my best friend at moment
life gets that way at times
take it day by day now writing keeps me going aswell
hi cassie thanks for always lovely comment
get up and down days but keep moving on hope you enjoying weekend
still horrible here see what torrow brings xxx
i loved this very dark tone sometimes its good to let this stuff out
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Hope things get better for you Jim! Good poem.
Thank you. I can so whole heartedly relate to this. Especially the sleep that does not come. Very nice.
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