Chills prick the hairs on the back of my neck
I feel;
swirling magnetism, depth up high, incredibly hollow and full
full and hollow incredibly, high up depth, magnetism swirling
: feel I
I feel like
I shouldn’t be here- flesh intact, In the heart of a mountain
mountain of a heart, intact flesh- leave shouldn't I
like feel I
They say to hold your breath going through
maybe it's because
only ghosts should be able to do things like this
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Author:
Vicecream (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 13th, 2024 13:31
- Comment from author about the poem: a spooky experience i had inside this tunnel; it was very disorienting and liminal. Be sure to read both ways both read to sure Be. ;)
- Category: Gothic
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Comments1
A most interesting tale in a most interesting format. Intriguing
Thank you! It was an intriguing and disorienting experience
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