Not quite yet

Alan R

 

The sun just set

But not quite yet

I see two shades of blue

Fighting, to live

The one that goes

Almost certainly knows

The odds of beating

Moonlit, pine trees

…And there is your face

On my mind

Your green eyes

Fighting to live

Yet another night

And the moment they go

I will, most certainly know

…But for now

The sun just set

And not quite yet

Moonlight steeps 

Through the pine trees

 

Let’s see, what the night frees.

 

Al

  • Author: Alan R (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 13th, 2024 20:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: 21:21, Ann Arbor, you test me.
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  • MR.apocalypse

    Very nice

    • Alan R

      Thanks alot!

    • Cassie58

      Beautifully visual Alan. Nicely composed. All the best.

    • Alan R

      Thanks alot Cassie! Have a great Sunday



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