War is senseless -
War destroys
War kills
And yet
Meaningless though it is
Like the fight of small kids
It persists.
The only difference is:
Children do not have malice
They forgive
They forget
They bond again
And continue with their games
But –
War is a deadly game
That destroys mercilessly
And it is the innocent who suffer most
And -
Man’s greed is so intense-
For power, for land, and for pelf
That he will indulge in wars
Keeping common sense on the shelf.
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safina (Pseudonym) (
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;You shouldn't start me off again - I've only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
you are most welcome to shoot off - i welcome all comments - lol..
actually, this was in response to a call for submissions on war on 'allpoetry.com'.
i rest my case, though i do feel that wars are basically senseless..
I don't know how some poets here spread themselves over other sites as well as this one...I'm flat out keeping up here.
I'd just finished heavily responding to comments on my Patriotism verse and felt all tuckered out: did a nap actually....
at my age, i need one small power nap too to get charged up...so go ahead and have one whenever needed - will add to your creativity when the mind is calm and happy
i confess that i do publish on very few other sites , and respond to any feedback as soon as i find time..
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
sorry for the late response..you are right, everyone is a loser in a war- and they make no sense at all
Excellent write
thank you so muuch. have a good day
You're welcome
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have been humans, and likely will continue.
Territory, power, gold, and the worst; religion. We never learn.
that is the true tragedy, that despite there being no gain, except maybe a little territory , all sides lose...but mankind has not yet learnt a lesson, unfortunately
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
yes , i agree with you completely - kindness is inborn, hatred is taught
I can only say (kudos) 🌹
thank you so much...appreciate it
There is so much truth here it hurts .. Neville
yes, it does..but still the wars seem to be going on and on
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