'Eyes'

NafisaSB

Eyes are the mirrors
That turn thoughts to words
It's a very subtle art
That aims at the heart

  • Author: safina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 15th, 2024 00:18
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 34
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  • Mase β™ͺ

    So true, good write Nafisa!!!🌹

    • NafisaSB

      thank you - appreciate your feedback

    • Cassie58

      I do believe that poets need to have great observational skills, so I agree very much with this fine piece of brevity Safina. Eyes are also the mirrors to the soul. Wishing you a great day dear poet. 🌹

      • NafisaSB

        yes - eyes are indeed the mirror of the soul and the heart.
        i have been busy as the festival season is on in india, but try to catch up on reading the beautiful lines composed by you, and am extremely impressed b the brilliance shining through many of your poems...keep writing dear - have a lovely week ahead

        • Cassie58

          Enjoy the festival season Safina and many thanks for your kind words about my poetry. Have a great week 🌹

        • Teddy.15

          Beautiful, eyes are the souls outer vision. 🌹

          • NafisaSB

            yes, thanks, i agree with your views.

          • Neville



            I like it .. I like it a lot & then some .. N

            • NafisaSB

              thank you so much..really appreciate your feedback
              have a good day

              • NafisaSB

                thanks for making my day [or rather evening]

              • sorenbarrett

                Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.

                • NafisaSB

                  sometimes the flow is less
                  and sometimes it is more
                  i am ok with it
                  as long as i do not bore...

                • Thad Wilk

                  A delightful poem
                  great brevity!! πŸ‘
                  A treat to read;
                  love it, 😍
                  penned superbly!✌️
                  Best wishes πŸ€ πŸ€— 🌹 Thad

                  • NafisaSB

                    thank you so much for your kind feedback..glad you liked it

                  • Thomas W Case

                    Beautiful.

                    • NafisaSB

                      when i get feedback from the poets of the calibre who are part of this user friendly forum, it makes me feel happy..so thank you very much.

                    • Thad Wilk

                      Short and sweet
                      AND so true!! πŸ‘
                      Thank you for
                      sharing poetess
                      much enjoyed thank you!! ☺️
                      Best wishes πŸ€πŸ€—πŸŒΉ Thad

                      • NafisaSB

                        thank you
                        keep up the rhyming response
                        enjoy reading it



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