A More Obvious Art

aDarkerMind

a more obvious art.

a seller selling porcupines

knee-deep nostalgia runs a hidden crab.

from a science lab

perpetual in a sudden gaze of horizontal bliss.

a kiss from the painted lips of civil war.

when eaten raw

all colours pawn their garbage bags

no dust supreme

no blaspheme from an oriental herb.

oregano born

toffee-apple brown in a pin-striped suit.

only eat it when it boils.

heaven has her landscape.

hell a darker angel now

with a wrong kiss on the flip-side of a key.

my horse's shoes

walking with the sparrows

to where eden gave a grace of god

and sucked one thousand apples 

from the belly of a cave.

am made of a mothers milk

from a fathers groin.

three silver coins for a coconut-shy

before they came

as splinters to my ears.

I listened in

and gave my legs to where I live.

three christs alive

all painted blue.

it is cold and all the bees are fast asleep;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Melvin James (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: September 24th, 2024 12:33
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • sorenbarrett

    I have a picture of sucking a thousand apples from the belly of a cave. Mental pictures that occure on occasion and phrases that occur as well. Most iteresting a verbal Rorschach.

    • aDarkerMind

      many thanks Soren.
      apologies for the late reply...
      will catch up soon.

    • Teddy.15

      A masterpiece love the thought of heaven owning the landscape wouldn't it be so much more beautiful than what we see here. If you haven't already published a book dearest Melvin it's time to think about it, your work is truly worth gold. I absolutely love all the imagery here, and your last lines which bring it all full circle 🌹

      • aDarkerMind

        many thanks as always Teddy.
        not sure how the poetry world would take my words....
        something to ponder over.
        sorry for the delay.
        am back, and catching up on my reading.
        hope you are well there.

      • Thomas W Case

        Superb work. You are a tremendous talent.

        • aDarkerMind

          a most kind comment Thomas.
          and greatly appreciated.



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