Notice of absence from Lil
If I don't respond in a few minutes I am probably at School, sleeping, with family/ friends, or forgot to bring my device. Or grounded.
If I don't respond in a few minutes I am probably at School, sleeping, with family/ friends, or forgot to bring my device. Or grounded.
The brown hair blue eye
And he doesn't make me cry
The big smile
Kind soul
Him its him
He listens to me and doesn't ditch me
Him
He always holds me when i'm sad
Defuses me when i'm mad
Him its him
He doesn't make promises he can't keep
And basically swiped me off my feet
He was new to school
So I helped him, but ended up liking him
Him its him
*Sorry you guys if it doesn't make sense*
- Author: Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: September 26th, 2024 05:13
- Comment from author about the poem: Okay guys so there is this guy named John, but not the one that is on this app (johnny is user) This john is a new one to our school, were only 3-4 weeks in... When I first saw him I was like π and so I just helped him around and started to talk to him more. Now we are 2 weeks into dating (since Friday .sept .13) And tbh he has treated me better than all my other ex's and even than my friends. So basically I found someone who is funny, kind, listens to me, and knows what to do when im mad/sad.
- Category: Love
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- Users favorite of this poem: Mase βͺ
Comments4
You know Lil, there is an excitement in your words. I can feel it. You make perfect sense to me. Happy Thursday.
Thanks cassie I am glad I can send that feeling to you!
Excellent write
Thanks!
You're welcome
Beautiful write Lil. βΊοΈ
Thanks Mason!π
I would have to change the gender but it makes perfect sense to me. Nicely done.
Thank you!
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