Echoing across

Maplespal

Echoing across

 

I lost control to my self control,

went crazy, went to the edge and let go,

past a dream, through a cloud to a mirrors view,

chasing everything away except for you.

 

I lost myself to aware by being aware,

remembering, reliving memories we shared.

Deflecting, reflecting from distorting my view,

watching myself pick and choose what is true.

 

I lost ground losing my ground

reaching for, stretching for the sounds,

repeating, echoing across a thoughts view,

and now I'm sitting thinking of you.

 

 

 

  • Author: Maplespal (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2024 18:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: brain dump
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  • sorenbarrett

    Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching

  • Dan Williams

    That's the thing; after all the mental gymnastics you ended up still thinking of your lover. Nice, true.



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