Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโt know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโt know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!
a shattered vase I am
a hole in the window
you were the baseball
broke me past repair
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NinjaGirl (
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NinjaGirl, no joke, you never cease to impress and amaze me. Here you did it again and I am glad I caught this "hot off the press" tonight. I so connected with this short but masterful poem. Great use of the baseball/broken window metaphor. You say much in very little words and space. AMAZING! I am in awe! ๐น๐ค๐
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words, and as always your reading of my poems!
I can feel it๐ฅฒ
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great ๐
thank you!!
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