broken pieces

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโ€™t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

a shattered vase I am

a hole in the window

you were the baseball

broke me past repair

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    NinjaGirl, no joke, you never cease to impress and amaze me. Here you did it again and I am glad I caught this "hot off the press" tonight. I so connected with this short but masterful poem. Great use of the baseball/broken window metaphor. You say much in very little words and space. AMAZING! I am in awe! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ‘

    • NinjaGirl

      Thank you! I appreciate your kind words, and as always your reading of my poems!

    • Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu

      I can feel it๐Ÿฅฒ
      I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
      Great ๐Ÿ™

      • NinjaGirl

        thank you!!



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