a shattered vase I am
a hole in the window
you were the baseball
broke me past repair
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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NinjaGirl, no joke, you never cease to impress and amaze me. Here you did it again and I am glad I caught this "hot off the press" tonight. I so connected with this short but masterful poem. Great use of the baseball/broken window metaphor. You say much in very little words and space. AMAZING! I am in awe! 🌹🖤👏
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words, and as always your reading of my poems!
I can feel it🥲
I like the metaphorical language used. It appeals to the senses.
Great 🙏
thank you!!
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