"U" AND "I"

NafisaSB

U’ are the sun

In my sunshine

Without ‘U

There’s no fun in life.

My success in life

Is also due to ‘U

And ‘U’ do fill up

The gaps in my life

BUT

How can’I’ smile

Without “U” being there

How can ‘I’ be a friend without ‘U’

If you truly do care

SO

U’ and ‘I’ are an inseparable pair

And if ‘U’ are around, I’ll always be there..

  • Author: safina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 16th, 2024 00:59
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.

    • NafisaSB

      it is only when the ego is pushed aside that the twain will meet..u and i will become we or us
      btw your bio is just too awesome ..been there, done this and that, wow its mind blowing...

    • Thomas W Case

      Beautiful.

      • NafisaSB

        thanks - appreciate your feedback. have a good weekend

      • Neville



        On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville

        • NafisaSB

          here's wishing that the sunshine spreads light in your life always.
          take care, and have a good weekend

        • Thad Wilk

          Awww, what a romantic, 🥰
          uplifting and
          refreshing write!! 👌
          Awesomazing presentation
          and a treat to recite!! 👏
          Best wishes 🍀🤗 🌹 Thad

          • NafisaSB

            i appreciate the way you are able to respond in rhyme..will try to emulate if possible, though you are way, way ahead
            thank you so much



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