‘U’ are the sun
In my sunshine
Without ‘U’
There’s no fun in life.
My success in life
Is also due to ‘U’
And ‘U’ do fill up
The gaps in my life
BUT
How can’I’ smile
Without “U” being there
How can ‘I’ be a friend without ‘U’
If you truly do care
SO
‘U’ and ‘I’ are an inseparable pair
And if ‘U’ are around, I’ll always be there..
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Author:
safina (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
it is only when the ego is pushed aside that the twain will meet..u and i will become we or us
btw your bio is just too awesome ..been there, done this and that, wow its mind blowing...
Beautiful.
thanks - appreciate your feedback. have a good weekend
On a grey day like today, these words of yours brought a little ray of sunshine with them .. IOU for the gift of that .. Neville
here's wishing that the sunshine spreads light in your life always.
take care, and have a good weekend
Awww, what a romantic, 🥰
uplifting and
refreshing write!! 👌
Awesomazing presentation
and a treat to recite!! 👏
Best wishes 🍀🤗 🌹 Thad
i appreciate the way you are able to respond in rhyme..will try to emulate if possible, though you are way, way ahead
thank you so much
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