Fortress

Lorenz

I'm the prince of an empty fortress 

that surrounds a desert where not even 

the tatars venture ...

At sunrise on the wall ,I contemplate the flight

of the eagle in the distance ,master of the peaks

beyond the forgotten realms ...

I am waiting for this caravan  to bring me 

this princess from the land of Khorasan .

  O fortress ! You're my strenght  and weakness !

I am this lonely  warrior  and poet  ,

rider of light  and shade ,

Ascetic  believer and pleasure  seeker 

who ,without cursing bows to fate ...

What wise spirit will explain me 

this fickle world ?

Miniature on a devastated chess board ...

Morning rose ,wet with dew ,

at dust dessicated...

At night on the wall ,I watch the angel's hand

tracing the message ...

My princess will come or maybe the enemy...

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 18th, 2024 02:40
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • tallisman

    Neat!

    • Lorenz

      Thanks a lot Tallisman !

    • Ellen Marsell

      I love it! It's like I've been to this fortress myself and watched the flight of the eagle, pondering, waiting. What inspired you to write this poem?

      • Lorenz

        Certainly" Buzzati's desert of tartars And an aspect associated with persian poetry !

      • sorenbarrett

        Bold fantasy pervades a poem set in historic and exotic images where if seen as a metaphor love and patience face the world

        • Lorenz

          Resillience face the world. sensitive analysis !

        • Tony36

          Brilliant

          • Lorenz

            Just inspired ! Thank you !

            • Tony36

              You're welcome



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