I Have Turned Around Now, Twice

aDarkerMind

I have turned around now, twice

still the hand deals thrice it's devils lot.

too wise. too calm

the love life of a rat

born of a breeding hat's long island sound.

this body, old and derelict

dead below the knees.

it is only when I sneeze I dare to bleed.

with my fennel chin

my chicory and a hand-held photograph of a swollen eye

that points me south to where the pleasant people die;

it is here I am more hollow than my Eliot suggests.

a smell of beer. a smell as yet I have yet to comprehend.

there is no-one here but all that never ends.

old gods serene in a fury with a tablespoon of salt.

depression lights it's cigarette

and there they are

one million strong on a breakfast plate

begging me to circumsize the mothers as they sleep.

 

  • Author: Melvin James (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 18th, 2024 11:33
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15
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  • Teddy.15

    Wonderful dear Melvin

    it is here I am more hollow than my Eliot suggests.

    a smell of beer. a smell as yet I have yet to comprehend.

    there is no-one here but all that never ends.

    Love these lines, and a great ending as you always do. Kudos 🌹

    • aDarkerMind

      thank you Teddy.
      good to see you back my friend.

    • sorenbarrett

      Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of the unthinkable and like from a nightmare comes the incubus who calmly sits on a chair beside the bed awaiting the awakening. Great lines and images

      • aDarkerMind

        you are most kind and generous Soren, as always.
        very much appreciate your comments and thoughts.

      • Thad Wilk

        Wow! 😯
        A deep, dark and
        captivating write!! ✍️
        Great read, 💯
        the imagery
        is out of sight! 👍
        Best regards ✌️ Thad

        • aDarkerMind

          you are most kind Thad.
          thank you.



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