The Weight of Unforgiven Sins

gray0328

 

The devil collects them like stones in a sack,  

a whisper every time you close your eyes,  

sins, small at first, hardly noticeable,  

each one a feather, until they’re not,  

until the bag drags behind you, scraping,  

and you think it’s just the wind in the trees,  

but it’s the burden you refused to set down,  

refused to confess, to absolve, to release,  

and he’s waiting there, patient as time itself,  

to trade your breath for the weight of guilt,  

to bury you beneath the things you carried,  

things you thought no one would ever see.

  • Author: gray0328 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 20th, 2024 00:32
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  • sorenbarrett

    Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry the later to some degree or other but some carry much more. Nicely written

    • gray0328

      Thank Soren, I always appreciate your insightful feedback

    • Tony36

      Bravo

      • gray0328

        Thank You Tony, I appreciate your feedback

        • Tony36

          You're welcome



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