In the Beginning of Our Forever

Neville

In the Beginning of Our Forever

 

Now, is the very

beginning

of our forever

and while

there is a reason

for everything ..

Except us,

or so it seems,

unless love

is a good enough

reason

of course ..

Then out of our

reach,

distant horizons

remain,

steadfast but so

remote

and stretching

before us, like

infinity stretches

imagination ..

And so my love,

maybe

we should each

pray for longevity ..

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 21st, 2024 04:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is what it feels like .. sometimes 🤍
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  • sorenbarrett

    I have been there. A great feeling, exhilarating. At such times I have often wondered how there can be a begining to infinity and that such love must have extended backward forever as well. Loved the poem it reopened some old feelings and thoughts

    • Neville


      We call that a win win around these here parts, thanks muchly .. Neville

    • arqios

      ….‘longevity’; now there’s a word that never concerned me much, but there are quite a few people and things that make one want to live forever!

      • Neville


        unless there's summat wrong with you, the term longevity doesn't bother anyone at first .. but then, an insidious awareness of it creeps on on you .. sadly less insidiously for some than for others .. cheers .. Neville

      • Tony36

        Excellent write Nevilie

        • Neville


          Thanks again Tony ..

          • Tony36

            You're welcome

          • Thad Wilk

            A lovely, touching and
            thought provoking write!! 🤩
            Ahhh, longevity and love.
            Very evocative poem,
            thanks for sharing,
            to read a delight!!
            Best regards peace ✌️ Thad

            • Neville


              Well if thad aint the best thing I've heard since Tony T chipped in I dunno what is .. cheers .. Neville

            • orchidee

              Good write N.

              • Neville


                Thank you S .. I hope you & your gang are okay 👍

              • Doggerel Dave

                Pretty happy where I am right now...but don't want to go on for ever... though if infinity has to be tackled then there better be some pretty good provision for this somewhere.....

                • Neville



                  I'll keep my fingers crossed for you 🤞

                • Dan Williams

                  Ah, the mixed blessing of longevity. A perfect example of the trip being the real goal. Nice.

                  • Neville



                    Many thanks for stopping by Dan .. Neville



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