innocence

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

Innocence I miss

forever in bliss

sadness forever?

not at all, never

 

you took it from me

now darkness I see

bad things looming

ever all consuming.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 24th, 2024 12:29
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Wow! Heavy write! If this happened to you, I am terribly sorry to hear that. The evil we suffer in this world really has life-long lasting effects. I want to say, first, it takes courage to write and share and put yourself out there that way. Second, brilliant poem that is both evocative and vulnerable. I have not doubt this poem will have a positive impact on anyone going through similar experiences and/or feeling this way. Excellent write, my friend!

  • sorenbarrett

    Dark and sad but with hope. Very nicely said



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