Innocence I miss
forever in bliss
sadness forever?
not at all, never
you took it from me
now darkness I see
bad things looming
ever all consuming.
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
Offline) - Published: October 24th, 2024 12:29
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Wow! Heavy write! If this happened to you, I am terribly sorry to hear that. The evil we suffer in this world really has life-long lasting effects. I want to say, first, it takes courage to write and share and put yourself out there that way. Second, brilliant poem that is both evocative and vulnerable. I have not doubt this poem will have a positive impact on anyone going through similar experiences and/or feeling this way. Excellent write, my friend!
Dark and sad but with hope. Very nicely said
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