I think I'm too loud

Dev Parth

I think I’m too loud, too much for this world, 
Like a flame in the dark, too bright, unfurled. 
My voice fills the silence, breaks through the still, 
But I wonder if anyone feels what I feel. 

I’ve tried to be softer, a quieter tone, 
But each time I do, I feel more alone. 
This fire inside me, it’s hard to contain, 
Yet being myself brings heartache and pain. 

Maybe I’m too much, a storm in disguise, 
Longing for acceptance in strangers' eyes. 
I think I’m too loud, a misfit, unwise— 
And in this loudness, I silently cry.

  • Author: Dev parth (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 25th, 2024 08:42
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Have been there and felt that. It yells in its silence but remains unheard in its screams. I think that you have captured the essence of the feel of this loneliness and understood its motivation. Very nicely done

    • Dev Parth

      Thank you for understanding 😭

    • Tony36

      Excellent

      • Dev Parth

        Thanks

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Caring dove

          I’m sorry you feel that way .. but maybe some people accept you , and would accept you . I’m sorry your hurting . Take care ..

          • Dev Parth

            Thank you for your wishes ❤️

            • Caring dove

              ))



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