Notice of absence from Qurrathul Ain
I'm taking a break for a while, for no specific reason. Maybe because, I don't get as much inspirations as I used to.
I'm taking a break for a while, for no specific reason. Maybe because, I don't get as much inspirations as I used to.
I don't want to be a rose,
In someone's garden.
I want to be a wildflower,
In someone's flowerless field.
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Qurra Ain (Pseudonym) (
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Don't you want company? (forget that, I know I'm approaching your poem - which I like very much - at the wrong level...)
I might need one. Glad to know that!
Here two meanings are approached simultaneously with so few words. I'd rather be a big frog in a small pond than a little one in a big pond (so much better said with the flower) And the idea of independence not being cared for but showing one's beauty for what it is as a wildflower and not only this but the only flower the big frog. The one to give beauty where there is none. A most lovely thought expressed in a minimum of words and beautiful metaphor a definite Fave
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