I see the stars
Their winking glance
Their gentle twinkling dance
Dancers of the skies, the dazzling stars
I feel the stars
Burning brightly in the sky's intensity
Glowing in twinkling sincerity
Embraced by the skies, the lovely stars
I know the stars
Shining jewels of the night
Universal blessings, a delight
Marvels of the night, the alluring stars
I learn from the stars
The sky's diverse configurations
Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity, among the shining stars
- Salvia.S
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My comments on the poem “Stellar harmony” by Salvia S
The poem speaks of the sincerity of stars. Poets see hidden or deep sights from what is around them. The poetess sees the sincerity of stars, for they do not seem to hate each other or fight with each other. Even if the laws of physics cause them to collide sometimes.
“Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity…” We should learn from the lessons of the stars : instead of fighting with each other, we should live in peace with one another. Otherwise put, there is future for each one of us. Therefore, it is pointless to try to exterminate others. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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