take me back to
a time where the name
didn't mean much more
than playing with friends
being silly with siblings
take me back to
before it all got messy
when life was fun
and it was all a game
take me back to
when I didn't have to be a ninja
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A poem that is resonate with just anyone who wish to turn things back to how they were. Excellent write đź‘Ź
Good use of “ninja” in this poem. For me, perhaps I am off, my interpretation is this…longing for innocence, for when days were simple, innocent, happy and fun, where one was not suppressed to living in the shadows (like a ninja) where one is not noticed…or in the case of a ninja…may seek to remain unnoticed, since ninjas, as assassins, were very secretive and unseen on purpose, due to shame, guilt, lack of self-esteem or any other host of reasons. Not sure if I am hitting the mark, but that is what I got out of it reading your wonderful poem! Regardless of my interpretation, great job!!! 🖤❤️🖤🙏
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