Old world

Lorenz

There's  nothing left  of the arrogant  old world

who leaves history ,forgetting  to  flush .

Denying its genius for an illusion 

of fragmented  ladies  and  gentlemen .

0ld golden empires plucked from solar temples.

Your greying feathers contemplating 

little  kids playing  fiddle ...

Do you see the Golgotha wood 

rotting fish scales ?

salomon david  ,unworthy  son  

depriving the sky of its moons ...

West side starry,the sun never sets again

silence keeping  it  awake !

 O you old world  ! 

Your flamboyant eagles  give birth to pigeons

circling around the folly table  

and begging for a few crumbles more ...

 And then Lee Van Cleef pulls out his gun .

 

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 2nd, 2024 05:55
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Tony36

    Great write

    • Lorenz

      Thanks .A touch of humor for day of the dead .

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • Ellen Marsell

        The oblivion of true values and the inevitability of the decline of former power. A bitterly ironic work with a powerful ending. Impressive!

        • Lorenz

          Europe has a brick in its stomach !

        • sorenbarrett

          Wonderfully worded this poem portrays for me a world rusting and aging with deterioration from previous splendor, then comes the final line and oh yes I remember Lee Van Cleef but then I too am old.

          • Lorenz

            I love the morals of these spaghetti westerns : World is divided between those with a gun and those who dig: ''you dig ! "

          • Dan Williams

            You had me with "who leaves history, forgetting to flush " and rounded off nicely with "Your flamboyant eagles give birth to pigeons". Good job here.

            • Lorenz

              A realistic assessment ... Thanks dan !



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