The past is a lesson, not a prison,
The past is a mentor, not a captor.
The past is a tale, not a jail,
The past is a page, not a cage.
The past is a foundation, not a stagnation,
The past is a phase, not a maze.
The past is a guide, not a slide,
The past is a map, not a trap.
The past is a chapter, not the answer,
The past is a teacher, not a tether.
The past is a story, not a worry,
The past is a friend, not an end.
The past is a history, not your destiny.
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Aloo Denish Obiero (
Offline) - Published: November 4th, 2024 11:28
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Comments7
how very beautiful, thank you for sharing
Thanks greatly; I'm glad you enjoyed it
Cleverly worded this poem tells of not being stuck in the past but using it to learn from a great message.
Thank you immensely for the compliment
Elegant style ! The past is our history and destiny ..my opinion !
Much thanks Lorenz; I appreciate your perspective concerning the past.
Much truth contained within a very well structured piece.
Thank you.
Much appreciated; I'm grateful for the compliment
Beautiful poem. Keep it up.
Thanks Jude, for the encouragement
lovely message - worth sharing far and wide..keep writing
It's my pleasure that you love the message; thank you
welcome - have a beautiful day
You're writing is so delighting
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