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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโ€™t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

im behind

arent i?

I can tell

I'm lacking

basic

knowlege.

they have

an advantage

over me

trauma they

did never

taste.

so they

are all ahead

but I'll make it

eventually.

at least

I hope so.

am I 

embarrased?

maybe

a little.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 4th, 2024 12:54
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 42
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  • sorenbarrett

    That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.

    • NinjaGirl

      yes indeed, thank you for reading

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Excellent job with this one, my friend! While "they" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, "they" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

      • NinjaGirl

        Thank you! I appreciate your in-depth analyses.

      • NafisaSB

        don't be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too



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