im behind
arent i?
I can tell
I'm lacking
basic
knowlege.
they have
an advantage
over me
trauma they
did never
taste.
so they
are all ahead
but I'll make it
eventually.
at least
I hope so.
am I
embarrased?
maybe
a little.
im behind
arent i?
I can tell
I'm lacking
basic
knowlege.
they have
an advantage
over me
trauma they
did never
taste.
so they
are all ahead
but I'll make it
eventually.
at least
I hope so.
am I
embarrased?
maybe
a little.
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That is what poetry is all about revealing oneself in words unabashed. Lovely taking a chance is the onlly way we learn.
yes indeed, thank you for reading
Excellent job with this one, my friend! While "they" who have not been traumatized maybe ahead in someways, conversely, "they" may also be behind in others This poem represents what true art is a reflection on self and the surrounding world. Again. Beautifully done! 👏🌹
Thank you! I appreciate your in-depth analyses.
don't be embarrassed - head high, chin up, march ahead - your time will come too
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