I lit a candle in the dark
To write
As the darkness slowly crept within me
I wrote
Words of woes
Verses of a void
I wrote until the last light died
And my words wept in the dark
- Author: Poetic persona (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 11th, 2024 10:04
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments5
A very sad time beautifully written. 🌹
Thank you dear poet🥰
Beautiful
Thank you dear poet🥰
This, my friend, is beautifully worded! Can feel every line, each word carefully chosen. Each line thought out. A brilliant poem indeed and one that I can personally relate to! Well done! 🌹👏
Thank you so much dear poet..I'm glad you liked it
You're welcome!
The candle that lights our way and keeps us company also burns our fingers. I love the imagery, beautiful job!
Thank you so much for appreciating , dear poet🥰😍😍
that concluding line is nigh on to die for .. wish I had got there first .. bravo thinkerbell & write on .. Neville
Thank you so much dear poet🥰🥰
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