Little Robin

Caring dove


Notice of absence from Caring dove
Taking a break

I sit here sighing , sadly missing me 

a disconnect 

and a tired blue feeling 


looking out to the greens

I see red Robin 

little Robin with warmth 

on the colour that sings so softly 

from her presence 

and I feel a sense 

of a smile 

 

I’m glad I’ve seen her 

but the sadness still is sighing somehow 

 

but if I hadn’t have sat there then 

I might have missed her today 

 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 13th, 2024 17:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: I struggle with dissociation and earlier I felt a bit sad .. I also have been having a bit of a cold , but I saw the Robin earlier . If I didn’t sit there then I might have missed her today … beautiful birds
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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Wonderful write and it really is amazing how nature can really speak to us at the right moments. Glad you were sitting there and got to see the robin today. Beautiful indeed! Excellent write!

    • Caring dove

      Thanks so much for the lovely comment ) birds seem to make me smile ( sometimes ) and I always love seeing them

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You're welcome! I love seeing and hearing birds myself! ☺️

      • orchidee

        Yes, a magpie helped me recently, then a crow another day. Crows are not ugly, as some say.

      • dollyu

        Beautiful, I love this ❤️🌹

        • Caring dove

          Thanks dolly 🙂🌸

        • Young Fella

          Nicely done! I really liked how it flows. The vivid imagery stands out beautifully. Keep writing. Great lines!

          • Caring dove

            Thanks so much ))that’s a lovely comment

            I see a Robin a lot recently .. beautiful little birds ..

            • Young Fella

              Very interesting! I presume that you're living in the countryside. 🙂 I've written a poem entitled Caring Glow—your profile name mirrors my poem's title.

              • Caring dove

                Not in the countryside .. no . The Robin just comes in the garden



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