people they get lonley climb in to a shell
face the day alone in there living hell
hide themself away from the human race
living in the gloom of there lonely place
such a shame to see people in this way
there are such a lot who do this everyday
just a life of lonlieness is all they ever see
locked up in there cell that dosent have a key
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Hello Jim. Your poem today will be relatable to many people. Loneliness is a curse. Iām lucky to still have a house full . My sister is a widow. She makes a point of going for a long walk every day. She meets people on the way. Same ones. Important to get out and about. Have a good Thursday.
i try to keep busy garden writing
helps a little this is my second year on my own
after loss of my partner harder at christmas time
life goes on so they say
hi cassie thanks for lovely comment as always
suns out here today but cold hope you ok
glad to see you back jim xx
Loneliness is a terrible feeling. Indeed, many people suffer from it silently and some do end up stuck in their loneliness. Thank you for expressing this truth so poignantly. š
thankyou for comment means a lot
Excellent write Jim
thanks for comment
You're welcome Jim
Alienation is a problem for many. This poem tells well the sense of isolation that goes with many peoples lives. Very nicely worded.
thanks for lovely comment
Our mental state can make us feel lonely sometimes . Having mental health problems does make it hard for some people .. some people live in their own bubble
Well our mental state can really affect things
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