Humans who cannot cope with
Anger issues over inferiority complexes
That take down everyone around,
Even those they claim to love.
© 2024 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Tristan Robert Lange (
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- Comment from author about the poem: #6. A modified acrostic. A poetic warning on a destructive origin of hate. Part of a series on societal warnings.
- Category: Sociopolitical
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A powerful illustration to accompany your acrostic. Such a destructive emotion. Well penned brevity.
Thank you Cassie! Indeed, it certainly is. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Much appreciated! 🙏🖤
Fuck that's the most offensive four letter word known to mankind in my humble opinion .. but a brilliant acronym & acrostic all rolled into one .. Neville
Fuck, Neville, I totally agree you! 💯 😂 Thank you so much for your time and your kind words, my friend! 🖤❤️🖤
I hate to say, as one said somewhere on several poems (not on this site!) and incurred poet's wrath: 'I don't much care for this poem'. It wouldn't be so bad if he said it just on one or two poems, but no, it was on several poets poems.
LOL! Indeed, I don't blame you for hating that! 🤣 Thank you my friend for your time and your comment! Much appreciated as always! 🙏
hate is something that will destroy the hater more than whom they hate
It sure is true. It is an all-consuming time bomb for sure. Thank you so much, my friend, for reading! 🙏
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you so much Tony! Much appreciated! 🙏
You're welcome
He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can burn the hand of the one that holds it, as well as to whom it is directed well written.
Indeed! 💯 Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! Much appreciated! I am glad the poem delivered!
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate has its place as well as love and happiness and so on..
Warning well posted however.
Truth. 💯 My poem is certainly of the \"all encompassing\" variety. But you are spot on. Glad the poem delivered and I am very thankful of your time and thoughts! 🙏
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
Thank you Thad! Much appreciated! Glad it delivered and am so thankful for your time and thoughts! Peace ✌️ to you as well!
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of "Humans" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
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