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Mutley Ravishes



Craving,

What changes

The direction

The serpent faces?

  • Author: Mutley Ravishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 17th, 2024 06:08
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 26
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  • sorenbarrett

    Depending on the pause in punctuation it holds different meanings and leaves the mind wondering and pondering. Nicely done

    • Mutley Ravishes

      To tell the truth I only had one intention when writing this one! Thanks for pointing out the different ways it can be read, Soren.



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