ticking time
thick as wine
sliding through my fingers
whispered words
will-less apologies
forcing themselves through the air
untold unfortunates
understanding is impossible
uttering a word I do not dare
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NinjaGirl (
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Time is slient, indeed! “Thick as wine”…this is poetry! 🌹👏
thank you! appreciate it!
You’re welcome!
“Ticking time thick as wine” A great line it not only has rhyme but convey an image. Brilliant!!
thank you very much!
It's an amazing poem. One of the short and sweet ones. One of my favorites. 🙂
thank you
Indeed, understanding is impossible most of the time. Try for when it isn't.
Yes, very true
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