peace in pieces

NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

i thought

id feel peace

all at once

but instead

i get pieces

here and there

with my friends

doing silly things

i feel a piece of peace then

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 20th, 2024 22:31
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
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  • sorenbarrett

    And so it is with life we learn in pieces we feel in pieces we grow in pieces. A philosophical poem.

  • The Struggler

    “I feel a piece of peace then”
    Perhaps peace is not a “whole” but rather given in pieces. Maybe the idea of “peace” as one giant feeling isn’t what it actually is.



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