united hearts

jim56

when two hearts unite love begins to grow
your feelings they will change as it begins to flow
such a lovely feeling you will feel inside
you will feel its power from it you cant hide

getting even stronger each and everyday
there to last a lifetime and never fade away
happy ever after you will always be
for  now and evermore for eternity

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 22nd, 2024 05:17
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of love reads Idyllic. Written in good verse this poem flows well and rolls off the tongue.

    • jim56

      thankyou for such a lovely comment

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Beautiful poem Jim. Rings beautifully! ❤️

      • jim56

        thankyou for your lovely comment

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          You’re welcome, Jim!

        • arqios

          Written only like one in love can!

          • jim56

            thankyou for comment means a lot

            • arqios

              You are most welcome.

              • jim56

                thanks

              • Tony36

                Great write Jim

                • jim56

                  thanks for comment means a lot

                  • Tony36

                    You're welcome

                  • Cassie58

                    Love, nothing better. What a beautiful poem Jim. Hope your day has been happy. All good wishes.

                    • Cassie58

                      Love that your cat has got a water bottle. You have to look after her. She is an old lady:) You keep warm too Jim.

                      • jim56

                        got her at 6 week old
                        was my partners cat
                        so i have to look after
                        she will be watching over me
                        you keep warm enjoy your weekend xxx jim

                      • RSM0812

                        When two hearts unite. It's simple like a picture. A thousand words in 14 lines.

                        • jim56

                          thankyou for lovely comment

                        • NafisaSB

                          lovely poem. hope every one gets a mate who lasts a lifetime

                          • jim56

                            thankyou for comment



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