i saw a little white dove sat up in a tree
while walking it the forest look down at me
he began to sing in the branches up above
a lovely melody that filled my heart with love
such a lovely song with such a lovely tune
took my breath away when he began to croon
i wont forget that day or the forest tree
and the doves sweet song that he sang to me
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Tranquil and beautiful this poem speaks of nature and feels light and airy. Very nicely done.
thanks for lovely comment means a lot
Such a beautiful write Jim about one of the loveliest of our avian friends. Wonderful imagery here. Very much enjoyed on an abysmal weekend weather wise. Keep warm and dry.
hi Cassie love birds loads of different species here
beauty of the country side
writing a country Christmas song at mo
prob put it on when done
love country music hope you had a nice weekend
very cold here. front of fire time
cat was looking at your poems today
must of liked them purring while reading
thankyou for always lovely comment
keep warm and cosy by the fire jim xx
Ha Jim, thanks for the smile. Pleased your cat likes my poetry. Good luck with your Christmas song. Waiting to hear it. Keep warm 🙂
will put it on when finished
glad you got a smile
she liked your poems i could tell
i dont get a purr she looks funny with her glasses on
keep warm by the fire best place to be jim xx
I once passed a dove on the side of the road.
Japanese doves are not alert at all.
That's because Japanese people eat whales but not doves.
such lovely birds
thanks for comment
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