Burning Star

Young Fella


Notice of absence from Young Fella
I need to leave for a while.

Burning Star
"Lucidity is the wound nearest to the sun"

A burning star, my sun.
The closer I get, the more I'm undone.
The nearer I approach, the more I burn;
Far away means darkness, with no return.

An intricate question, a riddle to solve
Your light makes my soul evolve.

My burning star, through whatever may come,

Shockingly, I love you,
Love you the way I knew,
I would have liked to be loved too,
Strongly, passionately, pure, and true,
With a love that's serene, mature, and bright,
A love so strong, it defies the night.

By YF

  • Author: MRF (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 26th, 2024 16:09
  • Category: Love
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  • Caring dove

    Beautiful writing

    • Young Fella

      Thank you for the comment. Enjoyed it.

    • TobaniNataiella

      Very well written, enjoyable read



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