My inner self a world un-explored
My brain and heart at war
I need a savoir
I need the Lord
Why am I pointlessly welding this sword
I'm talking to therapist
No one's understanding
I'm not suicidal just don't get the point of living
A life in dispare
I rather not disappear
But shine bright
To be someone elses guiding light
Oh how amazing it would be
To be
A star
At it's Peak
in midnight
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Author:
nehemiah adams (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 25th, 2024 19:11
- Comment from author about the poem: So my friend challenge me to write a poem using Star Understanding Inner Let me know what you think
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Comments4
Midnight stars, in the vast night sky. Time for quiet reflection. Never give up on your dreams and Mother Nature is a wonderful healer for a troubled mind. You have a good friend giving you this challenge and well done you for rising to the occasion.
Thank you
You are already shining bright, Vivid!
I’m so glad to see you in the “midnight sky”
Your words effortlessly shine, just as you are…
Great poem too…
Thank you very much
Always happy to see your feedback
L9ve it
Thank you!
You're welcome
watching over you
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