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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I donโ€™t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

taking over my body

a suffocating blanket

reaching for an escape

trapped can barely move

no breath comes and I drown.

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 25th, 2024 19:39
  • Comment from author about the poem: anxiety, panic, fear
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice. Short to the point and with good potential for metaphor.

    • NinjaGirl

      thank you for your read!

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      A favorite poem, but not a favorite feeling! This, my friend, captures a very familiar feeling for me. Anxiety sucks. This poem does not. In fact, it masterfully conveys anxiety in so few words! Brava! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

      • NinjaGirl

        anxiety is quite a beast! thanks for reading!

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          It sure is! You are welcome my friend! ๐Ÿ™โค๏ธ

        • Tony36

          Awesome write

          • NinjaGirl

            thanks!

            • Tony36

              You're welcome



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