taking over my body
a suffocating blanket
reaching for an escape
trapped can barely move
no breath comes and I drown.
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Author:
NinjaGirl (
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- Comment from author about the poem: anxiety, panic, fear
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Comments3
It is exactly as this that one drowns nicely written and good word choice. Short to the point and with good potential for metaphor.
thank you for your read!
A favorite poem, but not a favorite feeling! This, my friend, captures a very familiar feeling for me. Anxiety sucks. This poem does not. In fact, it masterfully conveys anxiety in so few words! Brava! 🌹👏
anxiety is quite a beast! thanks for reading!
It sure is! You are welcome my friend! 🙏❤️
Awesome write
thanks!
You're welcome
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