Bask in the light of the autumn sun
Your heart seen through
In the sadness of your smiling face
In the loneliness of your sad face
Purple ginkgo leaves fall like rain
Black crows with white hearts
White swans with green hearts
Birds walk on the dry surface of the fountain looking up at the distant sky
The rainbow wind hits the transparent wall
That is where I am kicking
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Author:
rin (
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- Comment from author about the poem: used DeepL
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Comments4
Interesting engaging writing
Thanks for what you feel is an engaging writing.
Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written
This is a machine translated text and I'm so glad you said that!
Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻
How did you notice that The transparent wall is a rule? You are right.
Enchanted by the imagery. Just lovely.
I am happy that you are willing to write that much.
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