The transparent wall

rin

Bask in the light of the autumn sun
Your heart seen through

In the sadness of your smiling face
In the loneliness of your sad face

Purple ginkgo leaves fall like rain


Black crows with white hearts
White swans with green hearts

Birds walk on the dry surface of the fountain looking up at the distant sky


The rainbow wind hits the transparent wall


That is where I am kicking

  • Author: rin (Online Online)
  • Published: November 27th, 2024 01:32
  • Comment from author about the poem: used DeepL
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    Interesting engaging writing

    • rin

      Thanks for what you feel is an engaging writing.

    • sorenbarrett

      Full of metaphor and vivid images, this poem speaks at various levels. Nicely written

      • rin

        This is a machine translated text and I'm so glad you said that!

      • arqios

        Rin! You had me at the title! My ginkgo leaves are yellow but these are way cooler! The transparent wall rules 👍🏻

        • rin

          How did you notice that The transparent wall is a rule? You are right.

        • Cassie58

          Enchanted by the imagery. Just lovely.

          • rin

            I am happy that you are willing to write that much.



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