Surrounded by fire
Walls around begin to crumble
Smoke covering eyes and senses
Begin to feel the heat around me
Fear engulfed me before the fire could
And then he came in
Breaking all the walls
Dashing towards me as if I am the most precious thing to be saved and protected
Taking me into his arms and rushing out
Now that i could still feel the heat around me but it was different
I felt secured.
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Author:
Starlight (
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Comments4
The title could be life
My pov is that the man could be \"death\" carrying her soul to the above world
Why do u suggest the title sir?
I will be glad to know your pov
I saw a Saviour
May be it could be
Glad to know your thoughts
Sounds like you found your hero.
Fictional bf saves the day 😊
Nice
Great write, awesome thought process. Thank you for the read.
Wow what a thing to experience. Great write ♥️
TYSM 😊
please do check out other poems too
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