Missing

Caring dove

Sometimes it feels

im so distant 

standing over there 

when I’m here 

so distant 

 

can’t sense me 

just someone who feels confused 

 

it feels like 

I’m in the background somewhere 

like a cloud behind the blue sky

away from self 

wandering why I’m not here 

wanting to be in the blue sky 

because that’s where I’m meant to be 

Feeling like me and with me 

 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 27th, 2024 16:47
  • Comment from author about the poem: Difficult day today with my dissociation and the way I’ve been feeling .. been feeling bit tired and down Sometimes I feel like I’m grieving .. when I feel so distant .. difficult way to feel
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Teddy.15, RSM0812, NinjaGirl
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  • Cassie58

    like a cloud behind the blue sky
    away from self

    Not a good place to be. I’m sorry you are struggling so Caring Dove. Take good care of yourself. Your poem is sad.

    • Caring dove

      Thanks Cassie for kind words . Yeah it’s difficult . Some days are a bit easier than others .. today was a more difficult day , I guess .

      • Cassie58

        Hoping tomorrow is better 🌺

      • arqios

        That’s where we’re all meant to be “ Feeling like me and with me ”! It can really be tough getting there and staying there. Those that have that life challenge understand, I guess the rest can only imagine. Be well caring dove, the yellow rose still shines.

        • Caring dove

          Thanks so much for the kind words .. some days are easier ,

          Easier to understand if we have to feel it

          • arqios

            These days I just try to live for the easier days; I used to dwell in the could be better ones and got nowhere near feeling like me or understanding why. It’s not easy but it’s a hope that one can reach for 🙏🏻

          • TobaniNataiella

            Been here many times Caring Dove, for me my poetry really helped put my head in some order. I just kept writing and writing and slowly worked it through, might help you it might not.
            Wishing you all the best and hoping tomorrow shines brighter for you.

            • Caring dove

              Thankyou for the kind words . Yes it can be difficult . Some days easier than others . Writing can help sometimes .

              • TobaniNataiella

                Your very welcome, Take Care

              • Tony36

                Great write

                • Caring dove

                  Thanks tony

                  • Tony36

                    You're welcome

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Oh friend, I am so terribly sorry you are feeling so distant to yourself and so lonely and blue. How can you not feeling that way? I am keeping you in my prayers, today and always. I have been. For what that is worth. Just know you are loved. 🤗❤️🙏 I am thankful for your courage in writing about your struggles and raising awareness #BreakingTheStigma As for your poem, brava! 🌹👏

                    • Caring dove

                      Thankyou for your kind words , ) yes , mental health problems can be difficult , sometimes . Not everybody’s understands . Some days easier

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        For sure. It’s a day to day thing, sometimes even moment to moment. You’re welcome, friend! 🙏❤️

                      • Teddy.15

                        You have reached out to share, I hope this in its self makes you feel better, you are stronger than you know, and you are not alone, sometimes just the thought of Christmas can make a person feel like this especially when they feel they are alone. Biggest of hugs darling. 🤗

                        • Caring dove

                          Thanks teddy tho I’m not sure I should have shared a sad poem .. prefer posting lighthearted ones really . I do have a therapist .. sometimes the way my mind feels makes me feel alone . Thanks for the kind hug 🙂

                        • NafisaSB

                          there are days when one feels like this, and its very painful
                          wishing you quick relief, and fast healing
                          well expressed



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