Sometimes it feels
im so distant
standing over there
when I’m here
so distant
can’t sense me
just someone who feels confused
it feels like
I’m in the background somewhere
like a cloud behind the blue sky
away from self
wandering why I’m not here
wanting to be in the blue sky
because that’s where I’m meant to be
Feeling like me and with me
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: November 27th, 2024 16:47
- Comment from author about the poem: Difficult day today with my dissociation and the way I’ve been feeling .. been feeling bit tired and down Sometimes I feel like I’m grieving .. when I feel so distant .. difficult way to feel
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like a cloud behind the blue sky
away from self
Not a good place to be. I’m sorry you are struggling so Caring Dove. Take good care of yourself. Your poem is sad.
Thanks Cassie for kind words . Yeah it’s difficult . Some days are a bit easier than others .. today was a more difficult day , I guess .
Hoping tomorrow is better 🌺
That’s where we’re all meant to be “ Feeling like me and with me ”! It can really be tough getting there and staying there. Those that have that life challenge understand, I guess the rest can only imagine. Be well caring dove, the yellow rose still shines.
Thanks so much for the kind words .. some days are easier ,
Easier to understand if we have to feel it
These days I just try to live for the easier days; I used to dwell in the could be better ones and got nowhere near feeling like me or understanding why. It’s not easy but it’s a hope that one can reach for 🙏🏻
Been here many times Caring Dove, for me my poetry really helped put my head in some order. I just kept writing and writing and slowly worked it through, might help you it might not.
Wishing you all the best and hoping tomorrow shines brighter for you.
Thankyou for the kind words . Yes it can be difficult . Some days easier than others . Writing can help sometimes .
Your very welcome, Take Care
Great write
Thanks tony
You're welcome
Oh friend, I am so terribly sorry you are feeling so distant to yourself and so lonely and blue. How can you not feeling that way? I am keeping you in my prayers, today and always. I have been. For what that is worth. Just know you are loved. 🤗❤️🙏 I am thankful for your courage in writing about your struggles and raising awareness #BreakingTheStigma As for your poem, brava! 🌹👏
Thankyou for your kind words , ) yes , mental health problems can be difficult , sometimes . Not everybody’s understands . Some days easier
For sure. It’s a day to day thing, sometimes even moment to moment. You’re welcome, friend! 🙏❤️
You have reached out to share, I hope this in its self makes you feel better, you are stronger than you know, and you are not alone, sometimes just the thought of Christmas can make a person feel like this especially when they feel they are alone. Biggest of hugs darling. 🤗
Thanks teddy tho I’m not sure I should have shared a sad poem .. prefer posting lighthearted ones really . I do have a therapist .. sometimes the way my mind feels makes me feel alone . Thanks for the kind hug 🙂
there are days when one feels like this, and its very painful
wishing you quick relief, and fast healing
well expressed
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