Red and dreams girl

Lorenz

A girl in red and  dreams was writing down

the moment of her life ,

confiding in a porcelain cup .

Her black pen tracing the intimate waves 

of some piano blues  rhapsody ...

A  cascade of  golden-autumn hair

full of a hold back chignon ...

Burnt chestnut eyes where a few cloud  floated 

Tears disguised as rain in her soul, grey shade...

 She wasn't the Ipanema girl .

 I contemplated the soft ovale of her face ,

north wind breath on ephemeral dunes ,

 She wasn't  the sirocco's daughter ...

The girl dressed in red was just a passionless dream...

 Who knows ? Bent over a lover's mourning 

undoing the cascade of  her offered  bun ?

I sensed ,the approach of the storm

and message to the angels ..

 Resting her pen on a blank page ,

she casts on me the ink of an inner glance.

 I was not a stanza in the theater of her litterature...

  The girl dressed in red and dreams has gone ,

majesty of a soaring eagle ,

 abandoning  a porcelain cup so desperate 

  to its customers destiny ...

 You who pass by without seeing me ,

morning mystery only leaving

an intriguing green tea fragile aroma...

 

 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 29th, 2024 07:26
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Ellen Marsell

    An attempt to capture the elusive: the feelings, thoughts and stories that the girl in red carries within herself, not even realizing that someone can read them. She remains a mystery and her reality dissolves into the poet's fantasies. A very enjoyable read!

    • Lorenz

      I've caught a mystery in the timelessness of a life ...

    • sorenbarrett

      Images that pass through the mind, dreams of what could be sensations of wishes a beautiful poem

      • Lorenz

        A very sensitive analysis !



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